I will give you full coverage on your screenplay or book

About:

The first 10 pages are essential to hooking a reader. Having detailed STORY NOTES can be a total game-changer. COVERAGE is an industry term for in-depth FEEDBACK.

I'm a huge nerd, ghost writer, and screenwriter (of every genre).

I'm a fan of art and popcorn. This outcast will provide full coverage - from storytelling and characters, to style and metaphor for your opening 10 pages. 

Grammar and formatting isn't the point here (although it is available as editing). The goal is to hook the audience right away and establish your world. I am also available to continue the process for the full script.

If you want in-depth page by page analysis (10+ pages of notes worth) and commentary, as well as creative options to embellish your intentions, I can help.

A low-risk $5 could change everything!

* rates/word counts are flexible *

Reviews

forrestart:Really good.

charlesvuolo:Very helpful, thanks!

dwihalliburton:THIS MAN IS A TREASURE...BUT as I want to be able to continue to get over-the-top professional insights to my scripts in whatever phase, I will NOT disclose that he provides a page by page analysis, that he shares a wealth of knowledge, that he is thoughtful and precise in his explanations.

adamharris232:Not exactly script coverage, more like intensive notes pitching suggestions for changes. Often very insightful/helpful. Good reader. Thanks!! ~adam

sosleepy:Fantastic insight! This guy is great!