I will be your pro developmental editor for your book or screenplay

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In-Depth 'developmental' edit, critique, and analysis. Developmental editing is am an intensive edit that includes 2-3 reads. SERIOUS WRITERS ONLY (must be able to handle constructive criticism).  

NOT A LINE EDIT FOR GRAMMAR, PUNCTUATION, SPELLING, ETC. 

BASIC: $15 x 2500 words

I will thoroughly READ & LEAVE comments in-line of the story and plot arcs as I go, identifying strengths and weakness. I will provide helpful and respectful input and suggestions on how elements could grow and/or develop. 

I'll identify and not awkward phrasing, plot holes, plausibility, timeline and character inconsistencies, passive voice, pacing, story continuity, and word usage (including repetition).

I'll review dialogue, internal thought, and actions, ensuring they stay true to the characters. I'll occasionally check for punctuation, spelling, and other small errors (NOT AN EDITING GIG). 

I also provide a detailed editorial analysis of your work. 

I do all GENRES. 

Contact me for questions BEFORE YOU ORDER. 
SERIOUS WRITERS ONLY

Reviews

nagia19:This seller is the ABSOLUTE BEST!!!( I know she doesn't approve shouting in writing) :-) but that is my sentiment. She provides tough love but it produces great results.

andrewjia777:The seller helped me a lot with my books, and all of her suggestions were very good!

kileyphoto:Excellent story-teller! Pleasure working with you. I wish you much success on the books! Would work with again. :)

violapansy:Seller had tons of comments that were detailed enough to be very helpful. She also pointed out several major flaws that I just did not see. Her comments have helped me to write a better novel.

kileyphoto:A delightful story-teller. You weave a magical tale for young readers in the three books I had the pleasure of reading. Too all the success in the world!! I’d work with her again. :)