I will provide hollywood script notes

About:

I am an award winning screenwriter in Hollywood, in tune with the current moods and trends in the industry.  

I will provide a detailed notes and breakdown of your script, exactly like you would receive from a high priced service.  The difference is, I work in the industry and have won/placed in the competitions you are probably looking to enter.  Price varies depending on length of the script.

Package Includes:

Logline: A brief, 1-2 sentence description of your script you can use to pitch.

Scoring: A score (1-10) for all of the following categories: Story,  Concept/Premise, Structure, Character, Dialogue, Grammar and Spelling, Originality

Feedback: Detailed analysis of your script, focusing on Concept, Plot, Character/Dialogue, Structure, and Final Thoughts.

Reviews

ckettle123:Wow! These are some very sobering notes. You have given me a lot to think about. Thanks for taking the time to read my attempt at screenwriting.

jeffrobowa:You have a great, clear voice and solid idea. Keep typing and refining. I think you have the beginnings for a full length screenplay. Make the plunge. Write it out. :)

jhutchins4812:great experience!

jeffrobowa:Thanks so much for sharing your script. Great job! Keep typing!

tokyosamurai9:Thank you for your great work. I hope I can get your feedback again.